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adanwlal escribió:Hey!   I just noticed something! Nothing tells what her name is!   Will we find that out later in the story?

  it tells you at the top!   

@bridah
thank you! ^^

OMG!   How could I have missed that?!   

  btw, sorry for the wait for chapter two- ive has writers block these past few days. anyway, I have part of chapter two ready:

chapter 2
im here. im at the entrance to deleted. I sneak past the robot guards and just hope they wont spot me.  they don't. to avoid being spotted by anything, I take a narrow bridge over what seems a huge canyon, instead of the road the robots are taking. the bridge is wooded, bound together with rope, and seems quite sturdy, I gingerly tap it with my foot, but nothing happens so I just start walking across. It was freezing, but then out of nowhere it starts getting hot. "too hot", I think. I feel a single bead of sweat slide down my back, and my mouth go dry. something's wrong. out of the thick fog below me, rises I huge wave of lava. I run. "this canyon must go down to the core of the earth!" I think as I run. the lava is fast with gravity, and splashes onto the bridge. I feel it start of wobble and wave around as the centre of the bridge disintegrates behind me. the bridge falls, and, as I scream, I manage to grab the other side of the canyon, and pull myself slowly over the ledge. that was way too close. I get up, and carry on down the small winding path.

 Mind updating?!