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Mensaje  adanwlal Miér Mayo 14, 2014 7:11 pm




               Star
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                            Star
I'm Star, an escaped fugitive standing under the moonlight
in the dead of night. I'm on the run, literally. I'm running,
running away from the police. My ponytail that holds my hair together
is breaking, as is my heart in this world. My long black hair's flowing in the wind
on this terrifyingly dark night, where the devil chases you to take
all of you're dreams away. I'm wearing tall black boots. My boot's are
black as my soul, or at least that's what people think. And is all because
my dreams have never been the same, and will never be the same as theirs'.
I said it was the dead of night and I meant that more than you thought.

It's night, now and forever on this dark planet of beautiful dreams
and horrid, limitless sadness. The peoples' dreams will never be like mine,
unless I'm terribly wrong. The people here, if you'd even call them people,
are actually dark beings that were sent here to take away humans' dreams.


Nothing in this world could ever replace the feelings that will
forever remain in my heart, the feelings of hurt, of love, of hate,
and the forever will to go on. I'm to go on, live on, and remain on this planet forever.
The wish, my wish, my only wish, is to be blessed with love, love by a friend.
That is the irreplaceable wish that befalls my heart, and always has.

My shoe's are stamping along  the ground of this dry, waterless planet.
It is dry here because there's no water. No water, no life.
Then how am I here, you might ask. It is because I'm a dark angel, as is everyone else here.
I'm an angel here that feels just like everyone else, even pain, yet I and everyone else can never die,
because a spirit cannot be killed. If you thing a being that can feel must die, you are wrong.
Me and all of the angels are the exception. Even though we are all angels, many of us are evil.
The evil beings, as you may call them, are the ones that pursue me on this eternal night.
The peoples' feelings toward me are to forever be horrid, I'm afraid.


I'm running on a dry planet and look behind me.
The beings are chasing me, holding there dark swords that are pointed at me,
at my life, and at my dream, my dream of having a friend. Someone to return my kindness
that I always give. I'm scared. I feel myself begin to cry as I runaway
from the two dark angels that are chasing me. As I run, I begin to recall my dream.


The reason I run, and the reason I fight, is all for my dream, a dream that will go on forever.
This world burns me, yet, I will forgive it no matter how many mistakes are made.
My eyes shine in the moonlight as my tears fall to the ground.

Perhaps the only tears that have been cried on this planet are mine.
As I runaway, I look to the moon and plead for my wish to come true now.
The time is right as the moon shines brightly.


I hear a scream from behind and look back.
When I see what has happened, I stop.
It's hair, it's face, and it's spirit tells me my only dream has came true.
The angel stopped my pursuers. Now they lie dead, at least seemingly dead for the moment.
They won't stay like that for long. The angel that saved me used her sword on them.
She walked up to me with her shinning blue eyes and handed me a sword.


I held up the sword and saw its shine that the moonlight created.
The sword it absolutely beautiful. Now I have a long blue sword and she has a long black sword.
She also was wearing a black outfit, only her hair was still in its ponytail.
"Lets go!" she shouted at me. With that, we ran away.
After all this, I knew my dream must have came true.
It was granted by the moon, the only bright light on this planet.


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Mensaje  CrimsonIzanagi Dom Mayo 18, 2014 6:14 pm

I really like it, very well written and I love the plot as well! I can't want to see more of your one-shots. ^^
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Mensaje  adanwlal Dom Mayo 18, 2014 7:34 pm

ScarletDrakon escribió:I really like it, very well written and I love the plot as well! I can't want to see more of your one-shots. ^^
 Smile Heh thanks! I'll post another one here when I can.
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Mensaje  Lovelly_girl Lun Mayo 19, 2014 4:00 am

I love the one-shot!!! Nightfall, this was awesome! *thumbs up*
Keep the good work going!!!
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Mensaje  adanwlal Lun Mayo 19, 2014 3:15 pm

Lovelly_girl escribió:I love the one-shot!!! Nightfall, this was awesome! *thumbs up*
Keep the good work going!!!
 Very Happy Awwww, thanks so much!!!  cheers 
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Mensaje  Briadah Jue Mayo 22, 2014 1:08 pm

Aww, she found her angel, her friend Very Happy 
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