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Mensaje  Joseyposey Miér Jul 02, 2014 10:52 am

Wow, I really like it! And your other stories, most of all Numb!  Very Happy When you get that story up, I'll be reading it!
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Mensaje  xSwimmieX Miér Jul 02, 2014 4:18 pm

I love it! I want to see more.
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Mensaje  Briadah Vie Jul 04, 2014 12:43 pm

Oh my god! She can see ghosts? Surprised  Scary affraid 
Dude, write the second half of that one shot, I wanna know more Very Happy 
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Mensaje  Semicolon; Sáb Jul 05, 2014 9:05 am

@Jo- Aw, thank you. Im glad you're enjoying them!

@Mino- Thanks.

@Bri- It's not too scary... Yet. :>
There is no actual second part to the one shot. After the short comes his story, explaining his parents, his twin sister, his older brother, and his like after figuring out his gifts.
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Mensaje  xSwimmieX Sáb Jul 05, 2014 10:47 am

You're welcome.
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Mensaje  Semicolon; Vie Ago 08, 2014 7:34 pm

If I was a child
Would you sing me to sleep
With smiles and with lies
The truth buried in deep

Would you tell me it's fine
Though you knew it was not
With bombs overhead
And people getting shot

But I am not young
I have seen way too much
I have heard children's cries
Missing mother's calm touch

We're told we're survivors
Though this war hasn't stopped
So we'll keep our will going
Until the last bomb has dropped

This is probably super lame, but oh well.
This poem is dedicated to those living in countries that are at war at the moment.
Usually you see poems for the people fighting in it, but I thought I would make one for the people living through it.
The inspiration for this was Anne Frank. I read her diary years ago, but for some reason, sitting in my dark room with nothing but the light of my laptop illuminating things, I thought of her.
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Mensaje  xSwimmieX Vie Ago 08, 2014 7:45 pm

Nice! It's really good.
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Mensaje  Semicolon; Vie Ago 08, 2014 7:45 pm

Pennysns escribió:Nice! It's really good.
Thank.
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Mensaje  xSwimmieX Vie Ago 08, 2014 7:51 pm

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