Thoughts and Rhymes
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Thoughts and Rhymes
So I've been planning to do this a long time ago, and I'm finally able to do it =)
I basically write songs, and even what's not technically a song, I write it in a "singable" way XD... So I'll start off with this song... I've been working on it for a while, and I think it's time to post it... Finally XD so I hope you all like it
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Smile baby, smile, I want you to smile
It's all I've always wanted, just to see you alright..
The tears in my eyes wont change a thing,
Cuz what first made me cry was seeing you cry.
Smile.. I adore your smile
You don't know how beautiful it makes your eyes..
Smile and enjoy your life
And I'll just walk away and go live mine..
Never ever wanted to let go..
But everything was pushing me away from you...
I've seen so much that I came to realize
That it's time to say goodbye
And forgive you
Just to end you...
I beg you baby, breathe and calm down,
Have you ever seen me let you down..
Feel free to close your eyes, feel free to drop the knife,
Now that I know I don't belong here, I'll leave, I don't mind... Trust me, I don't mind...
Never ever wanted to let go..
But everything was pushing me away from you...
I've seen so much that I came to realize
That it's time to say goodbye
And forgive you
Just to end you...
To end every dream I had of you...
And end every memory I lived with you
Ohhh it hurts so much to see you go...
Oh, it hurts to know that you're no longer what I knew...
So smile... And smile...
Baby, at least one of us can smile...
I basically write songs, and even what's not technically a song, I write it in a "singable" way XD... So I'll start off with this song... I've been working on it for a while, and I think it's time to post it... Finally XD so I hope you all like it
________________________
Smile baby, smile, I want you to smile
It's all I've always wanted, just to see you alright..
The tears in my eyes wont change a thing,
Cuz what first made me cry was seeing you cry.
Smile.. I adore your smile
You don't know how beautiful it makes your eyes..
Smile and enjoy your life
And I'll just walk away and go live mine..
Never ever wanted to let go..
But everything was pushing me away from you...
I've seen so much that I came to realize
That it's time to say goodbye
And forgive you
Just to end you...
I beg you baby, breathe and calm down,
Have you ever seen me let you down..
Feel free to close your eyes, feel free to drop the knife,
Now that I know I don't belong here, I'll leave, I don't mind... Trust me, I don't mind...
Never ever wanted to let go..
But everything was pushing me away from you...
I've seen so much that I came to realize
That it's time to say goodbye
And forgive you
Just to end you...
To end every dream I had of you...
And end every memory I lived with you
Ohhh it hurts so much to see you go...
Oh, it hurts to know that you're no longer what I knew...
So smile... And smile...
Baby, at least one of us can smile...
Malak- Messages : 119
Data de inscrição : 10/08/2014
Re: Thoughts and Rhymes
It's beautiful...
I also compose songs but I'm kinda slow at writing lyrics...
Briadah- Messages : 884
Data de inscrição : 31/03/2014
Re: Thoughts and Rhymes
Aww thank you <3
Yeah it does take time... This one took me like a month and a half, if not more.. But it's a nice feeling when you finally put it together after you've almost lost hope XD
Yeah it does take time... This one took me like a month and a half, if not more.. But it's a nice feeling when you finally put it together after you've almost lost hope XD
Malak- Messages : 119
Data de inscrição : 10/08/2014
Re: Thoughts and Rhymes
Can't believe how many times I've got that feeling...My songs usually root from a tune I've got stuck in my head...I made my first song with a guitar...I'm tellin you, the guitar made the whole process faster
Briadah- Messages : 884
Data de inscrição : 31/03/2014
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