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Mensaje  VanillaCreme96 Jue Dic 11, 2014 8:51 pm

I don't mean to sound whiny, but you said you would post the first lesson up a while ago. So, I just wondered what was going on...
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Mensaje  xSwimmieX Vie Dic 12, 2014 5:23 am

I know, I should have it up this weekend since I now have a break in my exams^^
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Mensaje  CrimsonIzanagi Vie Dic 12, 2014 5:29 am

I don't blame ya. Exams are tough. I only barely survived mine... -.-
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Mensaje  xSwimmieX Lun Ene 05, 2015 9:31 am

Sorry for not posting here a long time. Hopefully I'll get back on track with this.
For this lesson, I'm going to teach you the basics of any good story: outlining.
An outline is something which you do to have a clear definition of what you want to do, for example, here's a summary for a story:
Jane hates living in the country, so when an offer from a foreign uncle says that she's welcome to visit for the summer, she's delighted beyond joy, but her uncle's house holds more secrets than she knew.How will she react when she knows the secrets hidden from light?

It's not much, but it's fine to get started with. Now, here's how I outline;
1. Divide the summary/etc into three sections; beginning, body and end.
Jane hates living in the country, so when an offer from a foreign uncle says that she's welcome to visit for the summer, she's delighted beyond joy, but her uncle's house holds more secrets than she knew. How will she react when she knows the secrets hidden from light?


You can cleary see the different sections.

2. Putting it down in detail;
Now, it's time to begin putting our ideas down. The outline doesn't need to be perfect, and you can easily change/deviate from it when you're writing your first draft. You will need a decent word processing program. I use Microsoft OneNote (you can download that from the app store in Windows 8, or 8.1.) Here's an example of the sort of outlining I do:

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I organize my events chapter by chapter, but you can do it any way you want.
You can see my bad outlining skills.

Assignment: Have a summary for a writing project you want to cover for this entire class, and have an 8 chapter outline. It doesn't need to be fancy. Just turn it in by the end of this month at the least.
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Mensaje  CrimsonIzanagi Vie Ene 09, 2015 10:12 pm

Assignment Number 1

Summary
Reina always had a boring life, going on day in and day out with everything being just the same. Though when she stumbles across a pedant hidden in the walls of her dorm room, will her life get a little more exciting. How will she react once she finds out the past behind pedant and the black stains it holds?

Chapter Outline
Prelude/Prologue
Figures meeting in a Ruined Building
No names for Figures
Show them hiding Pendant in one of the ruined walls
One of the Figures chants a spell over hiding spot for Pendant
Hiding spot vanishes and figures leave


- Chapter 1 -
Introduce Reina
Reina is shown going through her “normal” day at her boarding school
Show relationships with other students and teachers


Chapter 2
Reina gets pushed around by “Queen Bee” Ellena (Bullying kind of situation)
Reina runs back to her room, crying and angry
Reina punches her wall in her dorm and finds Pendant


Chapter 3
[Time skip- Next Day – Early Morning] Reina goes off to her first class
Reina gets cornered by Ellena
Pendant reacts, and Reina is warped somewhere else
[Fade to Black]


Chapter 4
Reina wakes up, to realize she is in the school building but not the building she knew
Reina wanders around trying to find out where she is
Reina finds a room full of papers, all saying that the boarding school never existed


Chapter 5
Reina runs out of the room, confused and distraught
Reina comes across some wild animals
The wild animals attack Reina, though a Fey comes to her rescue


Chapter 6
Reina thanks the Fey, who introduces himself as Reon
Reon brings Reina to the Fey village and shows her around
Reina is summoned to meet the Fey elders


Chapter 7
Reina meets the Fey elders
The Fey elders explain the why she was brought to their world
The Fey elders try to take the Pendant. Pendant fuses itself to Reina


Chapter 8
Reina flees from the Fey elders, with help from Reon
Reon tells Reina to flee into the Myst Mountains and find the Kuro Naito Shi tribe
Reina runs as fast and hard as she can, though falls into Akatsuki Ravine


((Done and done, but its very very very basic along with something I don't really do for my writing. XD))
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