Poems and such by Lazybug

Briadah escribió:1st place

LazyBug escribió:She's beaten, broken and bruised.
Lying on the floor.
She doesn't want to get up and
fight anymore.
She takes a knife and just stares at it.
Thinking it would be best.
If she was to put her life at rest.

Don't you dare, a distant voice echos.
You've picked up a razor blade, and
raked it across your wrist.
Making yourself bleed so you feel better, so you feel relief.
But it's not the answer.
I know you think that you're all alone, but you're not.
You're one of many.
It's okay, it will be I know it.
Because I'm you. Look in the mirror.

I know better then anyone.
That you're beaten, broken and bruised.
Lying on the floor.
If you give up we both die.
All our hopes and dreams,
will fade into memory.
Stay strong and fight.
Forevermore.

This is my favorite out of all your poems... I mean, I'm against suicide and I believe for every action there's an equal and opposite reactions yunno...except all those reactions that are gonna take place are going begin with everyone that loved you.  And its sad and unfair to push the burden to some one else. Tough it out yunno. I'm really inspired by the above poem   Good job  

OddeteRJ escribió:

call me rj or oddie..

ma fv? dis 1
Stolen

I want a guy who is
faithful, loyal and true.
He isn't any of that if he can be stolen
by you.
Be sure to tell him
I said to stay.
If he can be stolen.
That's okay.
I never liked him that much anyway.

I want a guy who
tells me I'm beautiful
on my worst days.
Who holds me in his arms
and says "always".
If you can be stolen away.
Then you can leave, because
if you can be stolen.
That's okay.
I never liked you that much anyway.

Lazybug escribió:

OddeteRJ escribió:

call me rj or oddie..

ma fv? dis 1
Stolen

I want a guy who is
faithful, loyal and true.
He isn't any of that if he can be stolen
by you.
Be sure to tell him
I said to stay.
If he can be stolen.
That's okay.
I never liked him that much anyway.

I want a guy who
tells me I'm beautiful
on my worst days.
Who holds me in his arms
and says "always".
If you can be stolen away.
Then you can leave, because
if you can be stolen.
That's okay.
I never liked you that much anyway.

Really..wow...honestly I thought that one was a little sloppy of a write...but then again I did write it
while making dinner so  I'm glad you like it though  

Lazybug escribió:Thank you...honestly I changed it around as I was writing it on here. It's different from what I wrote on paper.
I'm against suicide...but I'm good at writing about it, and anti self-harm stuff idk why but I am.
Thank you. I'm glad that you like it.  

OddeteRJ escribió:

Lazybug escribió:
Really..wow...honestly I thought that one was a little sloppy of a write...but then again I did write it
while making dinner so  I'm glad you like it though  

its really cute.... dats y....   

Yeah I was trying for happy 

Briadah escribió:
Well, it's a good thing you changed the ending, otherwise it wouldn't really been my favorite   I guess most writers are good at that...most poems and short stories I've read by the others seems to always end in suicide. And I don't like it.... There's more to life yunno   
I'm sorry for ranting here  

It came to me as a really sad song so yeah, when I tried singing it with a tune I came up with and stuff it seemed too sad/depressing and beautiful. I wasn't really happy with the way it turned out so I changed it while writing it on here. It's not my favorite but it's good enough  
I have quite a few that end in suicide but they're that kind of poem that are supposed to touch people in a way that well touches you I guess. Like when you listen to a sad song you cry.

Lazybug escribió:It came to me as a really sad song so yeah, when I tried singing it with a tune I came up with and stuff it seemed too sad/depressing and beautiful. I wasn't really happy with the way it turned out so I changed it while writing it on here. It's not my favorite but it's good enough Very Happy
I have quite a few that end in suicide but they're that kind of poem that are supposed to touch people in a way that well touches you I guess. Like when you listen to a sad song you cry.

Briadah escribió:
Oh I know the feeling sistah  !

I like the poem that you posted. It has a really good rhyme scheme  

Yeah  

Thank you! I noticed that myself  I was actually really depressed when I wrote it.
I told my bestfriend I was writing depressing stuff again.


Him: wyd
Me: writing depressing stuff again
Him: well stop it
Me: stop what
Him: stop writing depressing stuff
Me: why
Him because it's depressing
Me: would you rather me do the things I write about like
wanting to die and stuff because I think it's better I write it than live it
Him: why would you want to die you have friends who would
go to the ends of the earth to make you laugh and smile
Me: I don't but I write about death/suicide and other depressing stuff
Him: why don't you just set down the notepad or whatever
and just talk to me and take your mind off of that
Me: okay make me feel better
Him: what's green and white and goes wham wham, wham wham wham wham
Me: no idea
Him: the hulk slamming Loki into concrete
Me: lol but I still don't feel better
Him: *posting stickers one after another*
Me finally able to message him back: lol
Him: see I know how to make you feel better

and I just messaged him saying "I feel better today"