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Mensaje  xSwimmieX Vie Ago 08, 2014 7:10 pm

I am that girl,
the one who's best friend was the pillow she cried into at night.

I am that girl,
who told others to keep going on, even though she couldn't herself.

I am that girl,
who dreams of dying to end her misery.

I am that girl,
who put on her facade of happiness.everyday, even though inside, she was a broken mirror

I am that girl,
who's biggest lie was, "I'm fine."

I am that girl,
who existed within her own universe because the real world had crushed her soul and heart.

I am that girl,
the one who is a living corpse of her past happiness, but she still keeps up that facade.

I am that girl.
The one who cried till she couldn't cry anymore.

I am that girl.


A/N: escribió:I barely ever post such sad stuff, but I just need to vent out. I can't go super personal so idek. I barely act sad here, but even I have lost count of the times I've typed 'I'm okay' while crying. I look like  happy person, but I also think 'wouldn't the world be better off without me?' I'm not some monster. I'm weird, and I wish I wasn't. I don't care. I just wish I wasn't.

I've given up trying to be a happy-go-lucky girl here. I can't keep up with that me. That girl exists, but there's a part of me that wants to die so badly.

'But I'm only human, and I bleed when I fall down. Your words in my head, knives in my heart.' - Christina Perri - Human
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Mensaje  Briadah Vie Ago 08, 2014 7:24 pm

Wow, that's deep Shocked 
But it was a beautiful poem. Smile 
My favorite line was
I am that girl,
who's biggest lie was, "I'm fine."

Very true Smile 
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Mensaje  xSwimmieX Vie Ago 08, 2014 7:26 pm

 Laughing It ain't deep, it's me just venting out.
But thank you! I just wrote in, I dunno, fifteen minutes?
It applies to me.
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Mensaje  Briadah Vie Ago 08, 2014 7:32 pm

Pennysns escribió: Laughing It ain't deep, it's me just venting out.
But thank you! I just wrote in, I dunno, fifteen minutes?
It applies to me.
Fifteen? That's actually a good time. The last time I wrote poetry, it took like a day.  Hopeless me.
Keep venting kiddo. I need more  Laughing 
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Mensaje  xSwimmieX Vie Ago 08, 2014 7:35 pm

XD
*pukes* YOU ASKED ME TO KEEP VENTING.
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Mensaje  Briadah Sáb Ago 09, 2014 7:35 am

Pennysns escribió:XD
*pukes* YOU ASKED ME TO KEEP VENTING.
Eww! In a creative poetic way dummy! mrgreen 
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Mensaje  xSwimmieX Sáb Ago 09, 2014 9:53 am

You know I NEVER take things in the way that they're supposed to be taken~
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Mensaje  ThePhivs Sáb Ago 09, 2014 10:10 am

Welcome to the club, girl! My bully- tough. I cry easily, and people laugh at me for being a crybaby. But it's okay! High school will be nice! I knew it because I won't be seeing my bully there! And that poem really suits me... And your life, is just like mine.

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Mensaje  xSwimmieX Sáb Ago 09, 2014 10:14 am

I'm glad to hear that things will be better for you! Very Happy 
Thank you :>
Haha, I didn't really say what was wrong in this poem, it's more of how I feel.
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